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This song poem, I realize now, can actually be a sort of a sequel story thing to Paradise Lost by Hollywood Undead.

To make it seem more like it fits the song, sing the whole poem in the style of the first verse of Paradise Lost. At the fourth stanza in the poem, stop and sing this in the style of Paradise Lost's chorus:

Let it all out
Let it all burn
God, my love, why? Am I lost in your eyes?

Let it all out
It's what you deserve
Oh my god, why? Am I lost in your eyes?


Then continue to finish the poem.

P/S I've started playing Alice: Madness Returns. *coughcough* Haha. /inrelationtothepreviewpicichosethatistoleoffgoogle

P/P/S This poem was written this morning(1/7/11) because I actually forgot completely about the poem because of my piano teacher's demon-drills on Thursday. =u=" I wrote the poem 'cos of a contest, which due date was today. XD
~luvcutiebear97 and ~xVerdelet are also participating in the contest, though only ~xVerdelet has posted her poem on dA. O3O Go check it out!
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roselinda889's avatar
You know what came to mind the moment I read this while listening to the song?
I imagined the murderer standing over the victim's bed holding the knife and on the floor near by, there is his warnings.(in letter form)